So the way to start a pargraph is to grab the readers attention by something funny, dramatic, or thought provoking. The thing I hate the most is when someone goes on and on without any real meanng to the words he/she says. I believe that the writter should be aware of the readers time that they are taking out to read your stuff. It is normal for a person not to have a story line but should that person make up a story? Even if it means telling an old story? What about Co-workers should a co-worker have more blog time then a friend? what about family? Should a girlfriend get more time then say MOM? What about mother-in-laws should they get as much time as friends and family? or maybe as much as your neighbor Bob? How about if In-laws were put in the pets ,teachers, and obscure friends area would that be better?
How in detail ahould a person go when explaining objects? Like "I saw a cool picture today?" or should one say "I saw a painting today that brought tears to my poodle's eyes, its gorgeous attention to detail shook my emotions like a little baby after a ceg of Redbull. I couldn't help but lick and see if it truely was a picture of white with specks of stuff on it or if my vision was blury.Once I had plastered my tongue on it reality set in and I came back to the real world and realized I was licking the McDonalds wall. The time held as every muscle in my body cunvolsed as I began to..." Now see I think thats a little to much detail but I need your oppinion.
How in detail should I go? What is the motive behind my writting? Should it be to tell you what my life is like? Should it be to make you laugh? What ,my friends , should it be?
As you read through this I know its going to be hard somedays your going to be like "Oh my goodness this is a great kid" and others our going to be like " Holy cow! Who gave this kid the computer to write". in any case I DONT CARE what you think! Actually I do I just really wanted to put I DONT CARE in caps and look I did it again... Oh man life is good.
Calmly,
Doren
p.s. See how much fun it can be to be random I really enjoyed writting this but for those of you who read this and didn't like it I apologize this will only happen every once and a while tomorrow I'll write something relevent to my life and God's provision and power.
I vote to say it all. Go into detail. Unless it's super personal and you don't want say something about something. Other than that I say go into much detail. I would. My opinion.
ReplyDeletehaha. cute post. i agree- i love details. and you have a funny personality and style of writing that works- so just be true to yourself while writing. that's what everybody is here for anyways. :)
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work!